Monday, July 10, 2006

Pichi Pichi Pitch, v.2

by Pink Hanamori
Published in the U.S. by Del Rey




Dishonorable Mention

Just plain sloppy writing. All else aside, it's just plain sloppy.

A series of disjointed scenes, transparently convenient coincidences, and cookie-cutter pre-teen melodrama do not a story make. I can see how it might work -- barely -- in an animated show, but television shorthand does not work in printed media, especially not black-and-white.

- Miranda

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